Spiking rocks green-fed,
flaking ice-bed so far from
your tepid mouth of rock-pool
with it's tender fringe of algea.
Dead crab in a polystyrene crate,
your eyes are still so impossibly small,
but does your sidecoded disc-brain, ridged,
remember minnow-crushing sundays,
your sisters' hands like stinging orchids
as they were lifted in the swash, their brutish scarlet bonegowns billowing -
Discos on a dead sailor's femur, until it would snap at dusk
from your humpbacked quicksteps.
Dead crab in a polystyrene crate,
for sale on a market stall -
do the eels beside you sometimes writhe questions
through their rubber death film?
Ask you why you didn't try harder
to snap the ropes
un-net the nets?







Devious Comments
The only suggestions I would make are possibly to change "your tepid mouth of rock-pool" to "your tepid rock-pool mouth". I know you've got 2 adjectives next to each other, then, but it just sounds better to me.
It really is unbelievable that you can make this out of a dead crab.
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